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Undertale Fan Art: Sans in the Hoodie

26/7/2016

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Sans has been waiting years for this. At first, Frisk was too young, too small. But now, they're finally old enough, tall enough, strong enough... ​
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Frisk carry Sans in hoodie

...to wear a hoodie with a skeleton-sized pocket in the front.

Sans now has the power to elevate his laziness to new heights - and, more importantly, to annoy Papyrus more than ever before.

​He put a lot of work into it, too. The hoodie's inner structure is designed for optimal weight distribution, and since skeletons are relatively light, Frisk could probably carry him all day.

Working so hard to be so lazy. Sans truly is a master. Normal people can only dream of such hard-earned sloth.

If you'd like to see art like this a few days earlier than everyone else,
​and to get private access to extra content,
 works in progress, and other goodies, ​please take a minute to check out my Patreon!
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4 Ways for Artists to Deal With Critics, Haters and Negativity

19/7/2016

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​One of the most challenging - yet necessary - parts of being an artist is the ability to handle criticism.

Some critics are harsh, some are gentle; some have valid points, while others just enjoy shooting pellets of unhelpful negativity randomly into the web.

Whatever form they take, they’re out there, and if you put yourself out there in any way you’re sure to run into them sooner or later.

Thankfully, Patreon writer Dave Hunt recently shared some great tips for how to respond to your haters, and how to handle your own reaction to their barbs.

Click the button below to check out the article:
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Click here to read the article

By the way, if you aren’t familiar with Patreon, it’s a site that enables fans to get extra content, advanced viewings of new creations and works in progress, and other goodies in exchange for supporting their favorite creators.

I recently created an account there myself, so if you enjoy my writing, art, music and videos and you want more, please take a minute to check it out and see what cool rewards you can get!
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Undertale Comic Dub: Your New Favorite Plant

11/7/2016

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Frisk's having some trouble dealing with their new favorite plant, but it's nothing a psychokinetic skeleton can't cure.

This is my first comic dub, and I wanted to take it beyond the level of simply talking while pictures show. I always appreciate it when dubbers can actually get me into the mood of the comic, and enhance it with well-timed and well-chosen music and effects, so that's what I decided to do with this one.

I hope you enjoy it!



You can see the original comic in my Undertale Art Gallery.

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How to Keep Your Readers From Asking, "Why Didn't They Just...?"

5/7/2016

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My siblings and I have sometimes joked that we could take over several fictional universes with the power of "Why didn't they just...?"

When characters fail to use an obvious solution, or forget a skill or superpower that could easily resolve the situation, it can be pretty frustrating for the readers.

​It can also hurt their opinion of the characters' intelligence, or of your attention to detail, even if the story is otherwise awesome.

How do you avoid instances of "Why didn't they just"?

Here are a few ways to either keep the readers from asking "Why didn't they just...?" or to use the characters' mistakes and oversights to drive the plot, increase drama, or induce character development:

1. List your characters' abilities, and refer to them when the characters face a crisis.

Whenever your characters are in a difficult situation, and are considering using a painful, dangerous or unethical solution to solve their problem, pause and ask yourself:

"Do any of these characters have a skill, connection or superpower that could resolve this problem in a safer, saner or more moral way?"

If the answer is "Yes", then refer to methods 2-4.

2. Make the problem harder to solve.

If you don't want your characters' current abilities to enable them to solve the problem easily, ask yourself, "What are the holes or weaknesses in these abilities? What extra challenge or obstacle could I throw in, that would neutralize the power they'd normally use to fix this situation?"

This can add some extra character drama, because the ability they normally rely upon is suddenly useless, leaving them out of their element and causing them to either grow and adapt or freeze and fail.
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3. Explain how somebody already tried the solution they're considering.

"We tried to warn them. They didn't listen/they were in on it all along/our contact turned out to be a spy."

"I already tried that superpower on it. Turns out, he saw that coming and used X to defend against it."

Alternatively, you can have them try the simple solution on-screen, and maybe even give the characters and audience a glimmer of hope that it's going to work... before dashing their hopes and forcing the characters to think on their feet.

4. Point out the fact that a better solution was ignored.

If a character isn't very bright, was too stressed to think clearly, or has a flaw in their personality that causes them to jump to extremes or ignore simple solutions, this can turn a moment of "Why didn't they just...?" into an opportunity for drama and character growth.

A character who shot an enemy needlessly can realize that they're too quick to violence, while a character who failed to shoot a villain and let innocent people die can realize that they're prioritizing keeping their hands clean over other people's lives.

A smart person who missed a simple solution while seeking a complex answer can discover the flaw in their thought process, and a person who failed an important mission due to an obvious mistake can go through a serious emotional crisis as a result.

Avoiding "Why didn't they just...?" can be a lot of work, but it vastly improves your story.

On top of not annoying or frustrating your readers, taking the time to explore and account for all possibilities can greatly improve your story in other ways.

It can make the characters seem smarter, because they've taken so many factors into account while making their plans.

It can drive character development when they realize that they've screwed up.

And it can add new plot threads in which your characters attempt the solutions you came up with, only to fail. I recently had a situation like that in one of my works in progress; I had a tragic and poignant scenario I wanted to write, but for the character to be driven to such terrible extremes, EVERY other possibility had to be eliminated.

It forced me to do a lot of thinking, and in the process of eliminating the other possibilities, I actually ended up fleshing out the character's personality, backstory and family history far more than I would have otherwise.

I also made great improvements to the antagonist, because I really had to explore his personality and abilities in order to make him dangerous enough to justify the protagonist's desperate measures.


It was a lot of extra work, but the outline is already far better for it, and I know the finished story will be, too.

Do you often find yourself asking "Why didn't they just...?"

Do you have any tips for avoiding that problem?


I look forward to reading your comments.

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    Stephanie is the author of My Fugitive, Voice of a Silent Fugitive, Heroic Lies, and Catgirl Roommate, as well as the artist behind the Undertale webcomic Just Cause.

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